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 <h4>Terms of Service</h4>
 
-<p>I'm pretty lax provided you're nice</p>
+<p>It's mainly "be nice".</p>
 
 <ol>
     <li>
         <h3>Don't be a big meanie</h4>
-        <p>Arguments are cool and all but don't resort to stuff like flamewars. Try to act in good faith - we want to be at least on good terms with people. Please act with understanding towards others on this instance. Most people here are probably struggling with a lot, be mindful of that.</p>
+        <p>Arguments are cool and all but don't make them into flamewars. Try to act in good faith - we want to be at least on good terms with people. Please act with understanding towards others on this instance. Most people here are probably struggling with a lot, be mindful of that.</p>
     </li>
     <li>
         <h3>Mark your lewds!</h3>
-        <p>Reminder that lewd is bad and nobody wants to be forced to see that. Just mark it sensitive, and post unlisted. That is to say, anything suggestive/ecchi upwards should be marked. If you wouldn't look at it with your parents/boss in the room, mark it.</p>
+	<p>Reminder that lewd is bad and nobody wants to be forced to see that. Just mark it sensitive, and post unlisted. That is to say, anything suggestive/ecchi upwards should be marked. If you wouldn't look at it with your parents/boss in the room, mark it. It goes without saying that if you're <em>going</em> to post lewd stuff, keep it sensible. Obviously nothing underaged or otherwise questionable. Or you could just not post lewd stuff. Either/or.</p>
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 	    <h3>This is a <b>Kink Shame Zone</b></h3>